Hey, I think the plot part needs to be cut down. Nopad 02:46, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
You may have a point. I'd personally be unsure what to take out though. I know the whole big fight with mechas has to stay in because it's all big and important and everything but it's the rest of it that, the freaking out over boys stuff that I like the adventure because of and so I feel that should be represented in the plot. I do have a tendency to include unnecessary detail though... so... erm... whatever. Ixcaliber 03:22, 17 July 2009 (UTC)